After looking at my piece again I have found a couple of smaller issues that needed fixing. The first issue was that my mums video was filmed in portrait rather than landscape so it sticks out compared to the other videos, I have spoken to her about it and she has agreed to re film her clip thankfully.
The other issue was after speaking with my teacher in our last one to one he said that I should look at getting clips from a wider range of people. As a result of this I have been in contact with a few people but due to it being a confusing and busy time at the moment only one person has yet to reply. The person who replied was a guy called Mark who runs a music shop in Glastonbury and suffers with multiple mental health conditions most notably aspergers. He has said he will talk about his conditions and how they effect him for my piece and we are looking to hopefully get his clip filmed by the end of the week.
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